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  Val on July 18, 2010 3:00 AM

  Yeah, that man on the right was a big distraction and had been roughly removed for a quick review of a better composition... You could remove the hands of the parent too, but the composition would become very uncomfortable as the viewers would worry about kid's safety... other than that the composition looks great to me... just my $.02... :-)

  Yeah, that man on the right was a big distraction and had been roughly removed for a quick review of a better composition... You could remove the hands of the parent too, but the composition would become very uncomfortable as the viewers would worry about kid's safety... other than that the composition looks great to me... just my $.02... :-)

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  John Eppler on July 18, 2010 9:43 PM

  Yup! I agree. At events like these, it's hard to control all of the elements. When oneelement detracts from the image.... remove it! Good job! Watch your straight edges! The front edge of the cockpit is a little rough.

  Yup! I agree. At events like these, it's hard to control all of the elements. When oneelement detracts from the image.... remove it! Good job! Watch your straight edges! The front edge of the cockpit is a little rough.

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